critique my diet!

[fuzz]

hey I've posted my plan for a cutting dieting in my journal here:
http://www.wannabebigforums.com/showthread.php?s=&postid=370006&highlight=diet#post370006

Any and all ideas are greatly appreciated...looking for feedback before I go with this hardcore.

[steveo]

Are you drinking Water? min. 1gal

What about your Carb in your 6pm meal.
I would add a potato or rice.