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    Need help with English Paper edit!

    I really really need help with correcting grammar and spelling mistakes in an English paper, I would be extremely greatfull for any help...maybe I can pay?
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    how long is it?

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    Well its quite a few pages, but its a quick read and for someone who is an English native it should be quite easy to spot the most obvious mistakes
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    Ill read if it's a good topic. What did you write about?
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    I am helping a girl and therefor I really need the help..cause I really like her.

    Its about muslim women in Sarajevo and how they relate to the western world.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rock View Post
    I am helping a girl and therefor I really need the help..cause I really like her.

    Its about muslim women in Sarajevo and how they relate to the western world.
    I don't even know what Sarajevo is lol. Sry dude.
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    If I edit it, and it helps you nail this chick, then I want payment in the form of video.

    Seriously though, just throw the paper up on here as a really long post and let some of us really bored people look it over.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rock View Post
    I really really need help with correcting grammar and spelling mistakes in an English paper, I would be extremely grateful for any help...maybe I can pay?

    Just saying.
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    I cant publish it here, its really important for her.

    But can I send it to you Mr.webb?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rock View Post
    I really really need help with correcting grammar and spelling mistakes in an English paper, I would be extremely greatfull for any help...maybe I can pay?
    Rock, i would like to help you, kindly send me the details, i will do it, since the birth of my child haven't been doing much of work, and if i could earn a little by sitting in front of the computer, nothing like it! have good command on the language, kindly send it to me

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    Quote Originally Posted by flaminjo View Post
    Rock, i would like to help you, kindly send me the details, i will do it, since the birth of my child haven't been doing much of work, and if i could earn a little by sitting in front of the computer, nothing like it! have good command on the language, kindly send it to me
    Really? Because that doesnt look like a promising "sentence".
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    Zen can you help me ?
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    Probably. Can you post the essay?

    Is there a deadline?
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    Quote Originally Posted by yankeekd25 View Post
    I don't even know what Sarajevo is lol. Sry dude.
    wow... just wow....

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    I really need all the help I can get. If you help me now, you are really saving my ass.
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    I got help
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